Monday, February 2, 2015

IF YOU'RE NOT HERE, PLEASE RAISE YOUR HAND by Kalli Dakos

Dakos, Kalli, 1990. If You’re Not Here, Please Raise Your Hand. Ill. by G Brian Karas. New York: Aladdin Paperbacks.  ISBN 0027255816

Audio book:
Dakos, Kalli, 1997. If You’re Not Here, Please Raise Your Hand. Read by John McDonough, Christina Moore, and Jeff Woodman. New York: Recorded Books, LLC. ISBN 1402549563

How is it that this collection has been around for two and a half decades, and I am just now becoming aware of it?  While I was sleeping, Kalli Dakos has made a name for herself by publishing several books of poetry exclusively about what goes on in elementary school.  Being a former teacher and reading specialist, Dakos found poetry fodder in everyday events and recorded them with humor and charm.  Some poems even tackle the sometimes serious moments in school like when a child dies (J.T. Never Will Be Ten) or when a child is singled out by a physical difference (Were You Ever Fat Like Me?)

If You’re Not Here is the first published compilation of 38 of Dakos’ poems of simple rhyme and free verse.  Universally appealing, these poems tug at the heartstrings, erupt the funny bone, and evoke memories that any child (or grown-up) who went to school can identify with.  A glance down the table of contents is sure to whet the appetite with titles like Is Your Head on Nice and Tight? and It’s Gross to Kiss.  The pencil drawings that accompany the text remind me of notebook doodles characteristic of wandering minds and restless fingers.  They complement and add interest without distracting.

The voice talents of McDonough, Moore, and Woodman increase the entertainment value of these poems threefold.  Well-known voices in the audio book industry, their vocal interpretations add a colorful dimension.  The volume is consistent and diction is clear.  They each do several different voices for various characters in the poems making funny poems funnier and sobering poems more poignant.

It’s hard to spotlight just one poem from this collection because many of them impacted me.  But  I found inspiration in Dancing on a Rainbow which expresses the feelings of a student toward a special reading teacher. 

Dancing on a Rainbow
     by Kalli Dakos

When my reading teacher
Comes to get me
For my special reading class
I feel like
Dancing on a rainbow.
   To me she is
   a light in the darkness
   the twinkle of a star
   soft as a cottonball
   a true friend.
When my reading teacher
Comes to get me
For my special reading class
I know what it is like
To dance on a rainbow.

This is such a beautiful segue into a discussion of words and acts of kindness that make us feel good.  I can envision a bulletin board full of color coded expressions and arranged in the six arcs of the rainbow.  These would be meaningful words, people, or events that make students feel like "dancing on a rainbow."   As I prepare to be a reading specialist, I aspire to evoke dancing memories in my future students.

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